Blocking pass: F1 correctness/evidence—remove the doubling claim; acceptance: no unsupported outcome remains. F4 legal—preserve the regulator's supplied wording and link until Omar approves any paraphrase. These precede rewriting.
Structure pass: F2 turns S2 into numbered evaluation steps. F6 is aligned with the brief and depends on that structure: add accessibility as a main criterion with supplied keyboard-test evidence, then remove the isolated S4 tip if duplicated. F3 aligns with “no ranking”: change S3 from mini-reviews to neutral examples attached to criteria, preserving verifiable product facts only. F5 conflicts directly with brief/F3 and is a scope-policy change, not an edit. Decision queue: Ana confirms rejection or changes the brief; consequence of acceptance is new comparison evidence, methodology, legal review, and likely deadline impact. Latest useful answer: before S3 restructure. Do not decide by reviewer count.
Sentence pass after structure: F7 reduce S1 from 180 to about 100 words after removing F1; F8 replace “seamless” with the observed capability or delete it. F9 is conditional scope. Current 1,150 − roughly 80 opening words = 1,070, leaving about 130 under the 1,200 limit, not 200. Options: add a ≤130-word training note, cut another 70 words, or defer; Ana decides.
Version steps: save baseline, make factual/legal changes, restructure in a new revision, then run source, word-count, link, plain-language, and proof checks. Coverage: F1/F2/F3/F4/F6/F7/F8 planned; F5 decision required; F9 capacity decision required. Risks: legal response timing, evidence for keyboard testing, and vendor facts becoming implicit ratings.