Chart audit: the truncated 50-65% axis visually magnifies a seven-percentage-point gap, and missing n labels hide different denominators. Redraw from zero or use a dot plot with the full meaningful scale; label 107/198 and 131/214, plus six excluded unknown-status records. Do not present until the denominator note is visible.
15-second version: “Among opted-in adults with known status, 61% collected in the six-week pilot period versus 54% in the prior six weeks—a seven-percentage-point difference. The periods were not randomized, so this is a reason to test, not evidence that reminders caused the difference.”
Full version, about 40 seconds: “This compares opted-in adult patrons with known collection status across two consecutive six-week periods. In the prior period, 107 of 198 reservations—54 percent—were collected before expiry. During the reminder pilot, it was 131 of 214—61 percent. That is a seven-percentage-point difference, or about 13 percent relative to 54, but the percentage-point expression is clearer here. Six unknown-status records were excluded. Because the periods were not randomized and the title mix differed, the chart cannot tell us that reminders produced the difference. It supports designing a stronger test. Before that decision, the next slide shows the opt-out and staff-workload guardrails.”
Accessible alternative: “Table: prior 107/198, 54%; pilot 131/214, 61%; known status only; 2 and 4 unknowns excluded.” Likely misreading: “collection improved by 7%.” Correction: it differed by 7 percentage points; causation is unknown. Audit: 107/198 and 131/214 map to Pilot!B4:C5; all caveats come from the supplied method.