Slide 1—“Twelve percent of reservations expired uncollected in Jan-Jun.” Claim/evidence: 1,820 and 12%, S1, exact period. Visual: two-number card, not a trend chart because no monthly series is supplied. Speaker only: define expiry; gap: cost or patron impact is unknown.
Slide 2—“Collection was 61% during the pilot versus 54% in the prior period.” Evidence: S2. Visual: two bars with n=214/n=198 and visible note “non-randomized periods; no causal conclusion.” Speaker interpretation: difference justifies a stronger test, not rollout.
Slide 3—“The pilot revealed patron and workload guardrails that a larger test must measure.” Evidence: S3 has 11 opt-outs/3 late reports; S4 has self-recorded ~25 staff-minutes/day. Visual: three annotated measures, no patron quote. Preserve weak measurement limitation. This combines outline items 3-4 under one readiness message.
Slide 4—“A four-week randomized test can answer the effect question with explicit safeguards.” Recommendation based on S5, not established evidence. Show process: consent → randomize 400 → compare collection; guardrails opt-out/staff minutes. Gaps: sample rationale, message timing, privacy/accessibility review, stopping thresholds.
Slide 5—“Decision requested: approve test design work and assign an operations owner.” The supplied evidence supports testing, not permanent deployment. On-slide: approve/refine/decline plus owner field; speaker states unanswered design gates.
Ledger: S1→1; S2→2; S3/S4→3; S5→4-5. No source unused; no cleared quotes. Remove separate title-only pages for patron feedback and workload to fit five slides. Before production, obtain source permissions classification, sample-size rationale, guardrail thresholds, and decision authority for the test.